ext_198693 ([identity profile] thelondonrain.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ziasudra 2005-12-05 08:24 am (UTC)

I think you'd like this... amazing how inspiration can come so quickly.

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“Sit down,” she says. “Sit down and eat your dinner.”

Since it’s about trying and not having your way every time, you can do this. You can sit down and eat your dinner and maybe afterwards, when she’s ready and you’re feeling brave. You’ll jump the space that’s been separating you from her and you’ll say it’s true. You really have missed her. And maybe she'll say the same.

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it's a tempered ending, hesitant but hopeful and not too sweet b/c you really don't know what the mother is thinking. but then you're only in her POV.

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