I just got back from working at the middle school -- way past your story submission deadline by now. I hope things turn out okay. I do like the changed ending. As you said, it combines hope with reality and that's pretty much a consistent theme throughout the piece.
Can't write much... I hope your class and professor like will like the revised version!
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Date: 2005-12-05 01:07 pm (UTC)Can't write much... I hope your class and professor like will like the revised version!