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The long road from Gaza

A Palestinian musician finds that playing with Israelis
leads across more than one border



After almost three months of intense travel and interviews, my friend Vanessa finally got her Palestinian musician article published. This piece is a unique look into the lives of asylum seekers/immigrants -- and even detainees -- who live in a small county in northern New Jersey. She gives Zaher, the featured "character" in the article, a chance to speak his words and tell his story. She also skillfully interjects U.S. immigration laws (and biases, imo) and sensitively contextualizes one person's story into the broader history of the U.S.-Israel and U.S.-Palestine relations.

If you read and like the article, please take a moment and comment to the article (login required). If you'd rather not log in, I'd be happy to connect you with Vanessa so she could hear what you think about the piece.



And... I got an interview! Two interviews, actually, but one is an informal meeting next week with someone from CNNMoney, which, business-challenged that I am, I actually find very interesting because the Web site devotes a lot of space to tech and gadget stuff that I can lose hours in just reading all the articles. Not to mention the handy Jobs & Economy section that I've frequented *g*

My main interview, however, is a campaigning job with the Working Families Party, a "grassroots, community and labor based political party with chapters throughout New York State." The party endorses candidates who are already affiliated with a major party, but is pushing for the open ballot option so that voters can voice their concerns for what issues matter to them even as they vote for candidates they otherwise would support in either of the two major parties. This is active voting here, and I like it. We'll see how the interview goes.
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An excellent piece written by my friend Matt Fleischer, published in this week's LA Weekly. It's a very long piece by journalism standards—over 8,000 words. But definitely, definitely worth the read.

Navahoax


Did a struggling white writer of gay erotica become one of multicultural literature's most celebrated memoirists—by passing himself off as Native American?


BY MATTHEW FLEISCHER
Link to the story

Matt is the winner of the 2005 Dan Eldon Overseas Press Club Award. According to the Dan Eldon Web site, Matt is a freelance writer and world traveler. More about Matt here.

And while I'm reccing Matt, this is the feature article he wrote for Undocumented NYC, and this is his profile article.

o_O

Oct. 20th, 2005 11:44 pm
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I thought this was supposed to happen only in movies, or to really famous investigative journalists who are out in the field digging for information.

You know those stories about small-town reporters who get leads on seemingly insignificant stories, only to uncover mamoth-sized truths about their cases that eventually link them to a world of sex, drugs, money, murder and meeting their super hot on-screen partners for that extra bit of movie romance?

I was doing research on a Chinatown bus story I'm writing for a university-based magazine, 700 words max. What I'm beginning to dig up are years of rivalry that led to acts of vandalizing, physical fights, gang involvements, money trafficking, and murders.

So much for a light-hearted "this is the Chinatown bus, blah, blah, blah..." story I had planned. *redrafts story completely*

I feel like I've been initiated.
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Need sleep... need to get out of soaking wet clothes...

But, hey, I finally sat my a** down and wrote something. Three hours for 596 words (woe), and it's not even good :\

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A few sites that I find helpful in both day-to-day settings and when I'm in a pinch for some quick journalism fact checking:

1. European Union
Ever wonder about what countries are part of the EU? What are the five EU institutions? When is Europe Day? Answers to all these and (literally) tons of other relevant information about the European Union.
ExpandAbout the EU Web site )

2. The Internet Broadway Database
Visiting New York City? Live there? Taking a day trip to the Big Apple from New Jersey? This comprehensive site is the place to check for Broadway shows, answering the who, what, where, when, and sometimes the why and the how, of each show—all a click of the mouse away.
ExpandAbout The Internet Broadway Database )

3. The World Clock - Time Zones
Ever wonder what time is it in Norway (hi [Bad username or site: lynkemma / @ livejournal.com])? Portugal (hi [Bad username or site: sra_black / @ livejournal.com])? Japan (hi [Bad username or site: akaisakura / @ livejournal.com] and [Bad username or site: ee970 / @ livejournal.com])? Hong Kong (hi Dad and Kwok Ching if you're reading this)? Or even closer to home...California (hi Mom)? I certainly have! This is a great quick-ref site to make sure I didn't convert my times wrong in my head.
ExpandAbout timeanddate.com )

[ETA: Extra info, 4/14/2005, 8:11 p.m.]
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The internet is so vast, how can one be sure that a resource site is worth the exploring time? This is the question I examined in my editing class' assignment for this week.

For my assignment, I looked at these three sites:
1. www.ccc.comnet.edu/gramamr (Guide to grammar and writing)
2. English Grammar Resources
3. Word Detective

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This week feels like vacation to me: my kids have this entire week off due to New York State's official February vacation (rumor has it teachers like this vacation more than students). AND my History of the Middle East class is cancelled, so no insane amount of books texts to read.

Which means my current mental condition is: brain dead.

Ah well, time for yet another pointless post...

Take the Math Test for Journalists!


I messed up on the one that required proper order of operations (hint, hint).

*is suddenly flooded over with memory of Mr. Cornell, my HS math teacher*
(I was quite disappointed when my cousin didn't have him)
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So my assignment for this week's Editing class is to lurk around the Copyediting -l Listserv. BOY does this list get an insane amount of traffic!

So here's my summary, to be submitted for tomorrow's class...

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When Words Collide, sixth edition
Lauren Kessler & Duncan McDonald, ©2004, pp. 19-27.
(Singularly the best grammar book I've ever read!)

"The word. That's what verb means in Latin, and that very definition reveals its power and its function. The verb is at the core of all writing: It propels, it positions, it pronounces." (p. 19)

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ExpandParts, Voice, Mood )
ExpandVerbals )
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Yes, apparently I have so much time that I don't know what to do with it
*avoids doing the right thing and go Christmas shopping*

What the heck, lest people accuse me of playing favorites with my classes...


Journalistic Tradition Final Paper
Length: 2,212 words (the limit was 2,000, oops!)
Summary: Literary analysis of five selected works by Mark Danner, John Hersey, George Orwell, Jacob Riis, and Eric Sevareid. All tied together with a rather lame magnifying glass metaphor.

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I finally got the editing and comments back from my reporting class' professor! If anyone's a good editor, HE is. The best part is that he really likes the article. *grins like a fool* He says no need for further reporting. *sighs breath of relieve*

With all the talks about multiethnicity and the public school system, blah, blah, blah...it was writing down my research that was the most difficult. Such complicated intra-race issues. Gotta love New York City
:p

What a ride...I'm grateful for the experience :)

So, in case anyone is interested, or needs extra reading material...

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Squeeee!

Dec. 3rd, 2004 10:04 pm
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My Marathon Article is Published!!!



The New York City Marathon seemed like ages ago, but the article is finally published! I'm so excited :) Two clips in one semester...not bad, seeing how non-motivated I am in trying to get clips on my own outside of my reporting class.

Publication: West Windsor & Plainsboro News
Date: December 3, 2004
Section: People in the News
Title: Running in the Big Apple

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I love George Orwell...!
Besides the part on his political development, which I have yet to go through, it's uncanny how similar he and I are. I know what he's talking about!

"Writing a book is a horrible, exhausting struggle, like a long bout of some painful illness. One would never undertake such a thing if one were not driven on by some demon whom one can neither resist nor understand."


Why I Write (1946)

A Collection of Essays, pp. 309-316.

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MY LAI MASSACRE -- three articles by Seymour Hersh
Reporting Vietnam: American Journalism 1959-1975, pp. 413-427


My first reaction when I read this was: omg, this is Abu Gharib incarnate! Well, more like the other way around, since the Vietnam War happened before the latest Iraq War. And the My Lai Massacre was about murders while Abu Gharib was about prison abuse. But the parallel is definite: when following orders and following one's conscience contradict, what, if at all, is the "right" choice?

ExpandLieutenant Accused of Murdering 109 Civilians )

ExpandHamlet Attack Called 'Point-Blank Murder' )

ExpandEx-GI Tells of Killing Civilians at Pinkville )
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Discover Magazine

December, 2004; Vol. 25, No. 12

SEEING THE UNSEEN
E. L. Doctorow

I'm doing this completely for fun (yes, I know I'm a nerd). Why? Because Doctorow's writing blew me away. This is an eloquent tribute to Albert Einstein—to the committed scientist that he was and to the universe that he spent his life getting to know.

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Atom Bomb on Nagasaki
The New York Times, September 9, 1945

Setting: Nagasaki, Japan. August 9, 1945.
Event: Bombing of Nagasaki, U.S. atom bomb II

Notable Quotes:
"It is a thing of beauty to behold, this 'gadget.' Into its design went millions of man-hours of what is without doubt the most concentrated intellectual effort in history."
~ Description of a deadly weapon in terms of beauty. This passage also shows Laurence's scientific background: he had "followed the developments in nuclear physics with keen interest."

"There comes a point where space also swallows time and one lives through eternal moments filled with an oppressive loneliness, as though all life had suddenly vanished from the earth and you are the only one left, a lone survivor traveling endlessly through interplanetary space."
~ This passage strikes me as a foreshadow of what was to come at Nagasaki, and for the "lucky" few who were to survive the bombing.

"In about four hours from now one of its cities, making weapons of war for use against us, will be wiped off the map by the greatest weapon ever made by man: In one tenth of a millionth of a second, a fraction of time immeasurable by any clock, a whirlwind from the skies will pulverize thousands of its buildings and tens of thousands of its inhabitants."
~ Laurence acknowledges the death that will take place.

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I cannot help but be reminded of what's been happening with Iraq. The U.S. bombing over Japan had one single purpose: bomb the Japs into surrendering. It obviously worked. Fast forward 60 years. I find United States' recent military aggression in the Middle East to have a similar goal: to force surrender, using all possible means, from the very people and land it raided and destroyed. Is it going to work this time?

I know I'm oversimplifying the issue. But I just can't be supportive of U.S.'s foreign policy, which crowns itself Superior over other nations. Especially not since I'm in over my head with theories and articles and discussions and papers in my Problems & Methods of Middle Eastern Studies class '_'

Even if it works. Even if there isn't a better way... Does the ends really justify the means?
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Notes for "Such, Such were the Joys," "Shooting An Elephant," "Marrakech," and "Looking Back on the Spanish War."

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GEORGE ORWELL
1903-1950

George Orwell was born Eric Arthur Blair in Motihari, India, on June 25, 1903. He died in London, England on January 21, 1950.
He went to school in Eton. After graduation, he joined the Indian Imperial Police in Burma (1922). This would be about the time when he wrote "Shooting An Elephant," which takes place in Lower Burma.
Orwell is known for a variety of his writings: essays, political criticisms, novels (Animal Farm and 1984), and documentaries.
He worked for the BBC Eastern Service during World War II.

The notes in this entry are for Quiz #1! I'm posting them here just for consistency's sake. See my next post for the Orwell essays which we'll be tested on for the Nov. 17 quiz.

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I Got Published!!!



I finally got my first straight journalism/reporting clip! Not that my previous submissions of the op-ed/fiction nature do not count, but I can't use those for padding up my portfolio should I pursue a strict journalism career in the future. Though I really don't see myself as a career journalist...

Publication: NYC Politics
Volume Date: October, 2004
Title: Jimmy Meng: I Won Fair and Square

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Ernie's War
Excerpts, Ernie's War

Excerpt: A Dreadful Masterpiece
Setting: Longdon, December 30, 1940
Theme: Beauty in destruction, life in death

Notable Quotes:
"For on that night this old, old city—even though I must bite my tongue in shame for saying it—was the most beautiful sight I have ever seen. It was a night when London was ringed and stabbed with fire."
~ The central idea of the piece. Though one is conditioned to associate horror with destruction, Pyle witnessed the spectacle that was the burning of London with awe and fascination.

"The thing I shall always remember above all the other things in my life is the monstrous loveliness of that one single view of London on a holiday night—London stabbed with great fires, shaken by explosions, its dark regions along the Thames sparkling with the pinpoints of white-hot bombs, all of it roofed over with a ceiling of pink that held bursting shells, balloons, flares and the grind of vicious engines. And in yourself the excitement and anticipation and wonder in your soul that this could be happening at all. These things all went together to make the most hateful, most beautiful single scene I have ever known."
~ Theme: beauty in destruction. Pyle uses vivid imageries to describe what he saw.

"Somehow I didn't have a feeling that this was war. I just felt as if I were seeing a terrific number of big "natural" fires. Even when I came upon two buildings that had been blown to dust by heavy bombs less than an hour before, there was still a feeling that it was all perfectly natural."
~ What should be the "right" feeling and response to the fire, if any?

"Life goes on—where last night you felt that this must be the end of everything."
~ The world does not stop to cater to the aftermaths of destruction. It continues.

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Drought Bowl

Home Country, Ernest Pyle

Setting: South Dakota. 1930's, during FDR's presidency.
Theme: destruction, courage to live, hope

Notable Quotes:
"You could see the whole obliteration of a great land, and the destruction of a people and long years of calamity for those of the soil, and the emptiness of life that knows only struggle and ends in despair. I had seen a great deal of this in the past few years. Sometimes at night when I was thinking too hard I felt that there was nothing but leanness everywhere, that nobody had the privilege of a full life. Of course I was wrong about that."
~ Destruction. The constant changeability of life. Reminiscent of Ecclesiastes, where there is profound hope amid despair.

"For every one that dies, a thousand come to his funeral."
~ Referring to the plethora of grasshoppers. Grasshoppers plagues come in cycles; it is part of the cycle of life: destruction, rebirth, growth, destruction, rebirth, growth...

"It was the tenderest, most admiring tribute to courage I have ever seen. It was such a poignant thing, so surprising, so spontaneous."
~ Applause to handicapped FDR struggling to walk. Analogous to the people's crippled life. They struggle to live on nonetheless. They still possess strength and hope in face of death and despair.


Ernie Pyle writes to people's hearts. He does not talk about life. He shows life by inviting readers to walk his journeys with him. Often the life he shows us is bleak. But it's real. The paradoxes in life remind me of the song "Blessed Be Your Name" -- Blessed be your name on the road marked with suffering/ though there's pain in the offering/ blessed be your name; You give and take away/ my heart will choose to say/ Lord blessed be your name.

Beauty in destruction. Hope in despair. Life in the threat of death. This is our world.
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This is London
Excerpts, This is London, 1940

Setting: World War II, London
Theme: War, survival, bravery, heroism
Type: Radio broadcast

Murrow was working for CBS as a foreign correspondent. This portion of This is London covers his reporting from August 18, 1940 to October 17, 1940.

Notable Quotes:
"This is London."
~ This is Murrow's signature phrase, heard by millions over CBS radio broadcast programs.

"Those people were calm and courageous."
"There was no bravado, no loud voices, only a quiet acceptance of the situation. To me those people were incredibly brave and calm. They are the unknown heroes of this war."
~ One of the reoccurring themes in Murrow's broadcasts was the calmness of the people. London was under relentless attack, but people still tried to live normal lives the best they could.

"If the people who rule Britain are made of the same stuff as the little people I have seen today, if they understand the stuff of which the people who work with their hands are made, and if they trust them, then the defense of Britain will be something of which men will speak with awe and admiration so long as the English language survives. Politicians have repeatedly called this a people's war. These people deserve well of their leaders."
~ Another of Murrow's themes is that of political and social hierarchies. There was the ruling class, the elite of England, and then there was the "little people." Murrow was primarily interested in the "little people."

"They've become more human, less reserved; more talkative and less formal. There's almost a small-town atmosphere about the place. Sometimes strangers speak to you in the bus or subways. I've even heard a conversation between total strangers in a railway car—something which was unthinkable in peacetime."
~ This reminds me of New York City after 9/11. And, just like New York a few weeks later, post-war London returned (still retained?) back to class distinctions and socioeconomic inequality.

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Bombing of Berlin

Broadcast by Edward R. Murrow, Columbia Broadcasting System, December 3, 1943.

Setting: World War II, Berlin.
Theme: War, its colors, emotions, and horrors.
Type: Radio broadcast

"The sun was going down, and its red glow made rivers of lakes of fire on top of the clouds. Down to the southward, the clouds piled up to form castles, battlements, and whole cities—all tinged with red."
"It was a great golden slow-moving meteor slanting toward the earth."
"D-Dog was filled with an unhealthy white light."
"The small incendiaries were going down like a fistful of white rice thrown on a piece of black velvet."
"There below were more incendiaries, glowing white and then turning red."
"By this time, all those patches of white on black had turned yellow."
~ Murrow uses color and light in his descriptions. This enables his audience to picture what is described.

"Berlin was a kind of orchestrated hell, a terrible symphony of light and flame. It isn't a pleasant kind of warfare—the men doing it speak of a job.... Men die in the sky while others are roasted alive in their cellars. Berlin last night wasn't a pretty sight. This is a calculated, remorseless campaign of destruction."
~ War in its full terror. Description of the German soldiers' fate evoke emotion (pity?).
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The following five correspondents all covered the Battle of Britain on August, 1940, when Germany under Hitler's orders went for "an all-out attack of the Luftwaffe on English ports, airfields, industrial centers, and London." These reporters were embedded in London and gave first-hand accounts of the attack.


Robert Brunnelle

The New York Times, August 12, 15, 1940

Quote:
"The British ringed them; then, one by one, dived on them. One vast, wild jamboree of twisting, flame-spitting planes developed. Four planes, then another, then others rocketed, burning, into the sea."
~ Description, good use of action verbs. I get a mental picture of bird-like planes fighting in the air.

"In a house that had not a window left the family remained at the dinner table. A newspaperman poking his head through a gaping window, apologizing at the same time for the intrusion, was told by the father of the family: 'You aren't the first one. It's a bit public not having windows, but the fresh air is nice.'"
~ People attempt to live life as normal even in the midst of destruction.


Helen Kirkpatrick

Chicago Daily News, September 9, 1940

Quotes:
"There is some terror, but nothing on the scale that the Germans may have hoped for and certainly not on a scale to make Britons contemplate for a moment anything but fighting on."
"And on top of it all London is smiling even in the districts where casualties must have been very heavy."
~ Germans bombed London hoping to devastate its citizens. But Londonites remained calm.


Edward R. Murrow

Broadcast by Edward R. Murrow, Columbia Broadcasting System

Quotes:
"It didn't require a bombing of Buckingham Palace to convince these people that they are all in this thing together. There is nothing exclusive about being bombed these days."
"The King and Queen have earned the respect and admiration of the nation, but so have tens of thousands of humble fold who are much less well protected."
"You must understand that a world is dying, that old values, the old prejudices, and the old bases of power and prestige are going."
"You are witnessing the beginning of a revolution, maybe the death of an age."
~ Murrow's underlying theme is that class distinction was slowly disappearing as a result of the war. The elite no longer had special privileges, the old order was passing away. This showed a particular common war sentiment -- painting a rosy picture of the future.


Robert J. Casey

Chicago Daily News, September 17, 1940

Quotes:
"It is most unlikely he will ever have any funeral at all."
"In other words, though nobody noticed it at the time, he was made of the stuff heroes are made of."
"The bomb went off at 9:10, blew a crater forty feet wide. No trace has been found of Evans."
~ Jock Evans was simultaneously a nobody and a hero. But he was a hero of circumstances. War gave him fame and attention, but also took his life.


S. N. Behrman

The New Yorker, 1945

Quotes:
"Most of the women wore no stockings. I had been seeing this all summer in New York. But the American legs were tanned and agreeable, whereas these English ones were muddy and streaked bluish and red with the cold."
~ During war, the tangible limitation to ordinary people were material restrictions, not the abstract "loss of freedom."

"I looked up. On the third story of a house on the corner, following accurately the theatrical convention of the missing fourth wall, was an exquisite, suspended drawing room.... All but the framework of the rest of the house was gone, but there it hung, this upstairs drawing room, elegant and aloof."
~ The drawing room is a symbol of the elite, of the old order. The structure that was part of the elite was being destroyed as a result of the war. Again, rosy picture war sentiment.

"'England,' he said in the standard summary, 'will never be the same again.' He then made a rueful acknowledgment that there would be another England, but he felt that his had vanished. Fashionable London, upper-class London, is a vast, urban Cherry Orchard."
~ War sentiment, predicting the destruction of the social fabric.
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Not So Wild A Dream
New York: Atheneum, 1976

Setting: Velva, North Dakota. During FDR's time.
Theme: Identity, community, class perception.
Characters: Eric Sevareid, family/relatives, friends.
Condition: Drought.

Notable Quotes:
"Wheat was the common denominator of this democracy. It made all men equal, in prosperity or wretchedness."
"the soil was perfect for the crop...it required steadier purpose, harder work, and better men than the finding of gold; but the wheat was their gold. This was the Wheat Rush."
"Perhaps it was our common dependence upon the wheat that made all men essentially equal, but I do know now, having looked at society in many countries, that we were a true democracy in that huddled community of painted boards. A man might affect pretensions, but he could not pretend for long."
~ Wheat is a big theme in this section. It is an important commodity in this time of drought and national depression. It means no secrecy and individuality within the community.

"Very early I acquired a sense of having no identity in the world, of inhabiting, by some cruel mistake, an outland, a lost and forgotten place upon the far horizon of my country."
~ In a place where community is key, individuality is buried.

"Another boy said to me: 'Your father is a pretty good man, even if he is the richest man in town.' I had no feeling of pride; far from it. I was shocked, and hurried home, close to tears."
~ In this wheat community, distinctions are frowned upon. The rich is the "other," and draws contempt.

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Sevareid was acute with people because he was acute with himself. There was a lot of introspection in his writing—not the inward brooding kind, but that of deep contemplation that took the rest of the world into consideration. His themes: identity, community, class perception, fear, death, survival, war, cross-cultural experiences...reflected who he was. He was a social commentator; he passed no judgment, but he had his stands. Everything he experienced in Not So Wild A Dream shaped him into the reporter he became.
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Refugees from Thrace, Ernest Hemingway
The Toronto Daily Star, November 14, 1922

Setting: Sofia, Bulgaria.
Event: Grego-Turkish War, 1919-1922. The Thracian evacuation, shortly after Turkish victory.
Characters: Ernest Hemingway, Madame Marie, Shorty (and Company), soldiers.

Notable Quotes:
"...the same ghastly, shambling procession of people being driven from their homes is filing in unbroken line along the muddy road to Macedonia. A quarter of a million people take a long time to move."
~ Vivid imagery, connoting continual evacuation.
~ Literary device -- summary sentence at the end of paragraph, Hemingway's commentary: a quarter of a million people take a long time to move.

"I found the station a mud-hole crowded with soldiers, bundles, bed-springs, bedding, sewing machines, babies, broken carts, all in the mud and the drizzling rain."
~ Literary device -- alliteration: bundles, bed-springs, bedding, etc.
~ Repeated theme -- mud. Here and throughout the piece.

"Got some swell shots of a burning village to-day." Shorty pulled off a boot. "Good show—a burning village. Like kickin' over an ant hill."
~ Shorty is a moving picture operator. His speech is like a movie script.
~ Ant hill: imagery used in A Farewell to Arms symbolizing soldiers heading towards their death.

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